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I had an idea

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I have been struggling to write and have come up with plan to see how well I know my characters by trying to write 500 words.  About each in the way they would.  What do you think?  
Kass
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sorry if  there are any  era  i can't spell most of the time  

It started the week before with meeting up daily to practice at zane as he had the most space  and could  leave drum kit set up  meeting Jan  outside let  him finish smoking  before   we head  to   zane  wasn't  sure  what time  he'd finish  as  we  turned into  car park a  bike  whisked  past  slowly into   bike shelter zane  met  us  door  as he took his helmet of  before unlocking  door  we  followed  him up to  the top  floor  where  he  live now. He unpacked his laptop got us drink kitchen as it turned on, he disappeared to change out his leather before he reappeared guitar case in hand   set down against the chair  we sat waiting for Charlie . Arrived as we checking the tune  on  guitars   as zane did the  same the drum kit I let  Charlie in before  started   to practice we had to decide on the tracks
"What play list" zane asked looking up from his laptop on a table in front of us  
What the choice  
Old new   or mix
What have you been working on then" Jan asked
"I was thinking  old, new, old ,new,   old, old and  new  like this  one" selecting play list  on  iTunes   letting it  play  zane  went  put the  pizza in  before got to  late
"Sound good so the list would be  
"Entry fee, Ennui, the darkest heart, sand storm, lightning strike"
"For what day"
"Saturday"
"Normal Friday I asked as zane got pizza out"
"Yeh if you're good with"
"Sure"  
"Practice but after pizza"
"yeah sounds good"  we practice late  into the  evening  before   crash   before doing the next night  it  same that  we  had to work  zane   rest  week and bit next  of    I had planned  to do the same  but  thing   change  and was no longer able to   only  had  Thursday Friday  and   then  week end and the following   Monday    being it  was only  Monday  and  now Tuesday  we continued that  way  until Wes day  stay over practicing until later  and sleeping in   this past up to Friday morning when we packed up   kit  headed to where we  going to be playing   for a sound check an old church turned  in  turning into pub  and  hall for events  we checking where going staying with   lot other competes  before  setting up to  sound check   once done hung  watching the  other band do the  same. Then  we went for lunch before  hang in are room waiting for tonight sleeping bit  as we  need then  energy  then  returning to  the   hall waiting to  go  on we drank plenty of energy  drink  the band before us finished  we step as they play the band video new addition this year   as ended we were ready   zane introduction   and  play  the  first plan  we  one  of the  last  band  to paly we packet up band stated on the back  stage locking it  back into the van   before  moving it  back safer    parking into   b and b parking spot  then.  We head back to  our room  I was   meant  sharing with  Jan  but  he wasn't back and  that  meant  I he would company  grabbing bag   I followed zane to his   room   we shared kids  I knew he wouldn't  mind.  Zane used  the  bathroom  first   when  I came zane was  lying flat on the  cover   I flopped   on the  other bed  I mutter more to  myself  not even sure what  I  was saying
"Jan" zane said laugh "don't share his room then"
"I won't but thought as birthday better you have own room"
"I don't care we'll see what happen we can go home on Sunday   if don't get throw"
"Well as long as you're happy?"
"Yep tired tho"
"Yup night" I turn light off rolled under cover   hearing zane do the zane I got muffle reply  
"night" I next thing  I  knew  there  was a  bag  on the  door  and light coming in the window   jumping up  I let  exited  Charlie  into  the room    who jumped zane bed no hearing get off  I knew zane hadn't be  in bed  reading  zane  came bathroom full  dress after hearing the  knock  
"Morning Charlie" he said sits on his bed  
" morning , she guess  what  
What  I  said" knowing she tell
We throw first  round and tonight  rescored label  guy   their  judging  and prize  is  record deal  get past  today and win  
Yes how you know  
Yeah for weeks I didn't you to freak knew you would, Fabien  told me  Fabien?  
Seth brother,One of his brothers
How many does he have?
Three Fabien, Nathan, Aran why  
Just wonder, older  
Yeah youngest and he got Sister Lucy older again going find food  
"Wait for me I won't be long" I quickly shower not getting my hair wet then dressed   then  head down  checking to  see if Jan was up he was  joined for breakfast   on the way we grabbed  something  for lunch  then  headed again for sound check  then  all band meet up  to  here  the un time  before heading back to chill  and eat before show .   We were all set just hyping up to go  on   all bands on the same stage to night   from  ten  down  6   then  to  3  for last day   not made it  that far yet I grabbed  some air this going to  hard the song  still roar with meaning  true story   zane was  ready back me up knew  he lyrics   I cracked  last time  the crowd  didn't  like planed  so stuck to  practicing this  way  sound good  like should be  not slip up   zane  outside   to  cool me in night  was cold  for time year  then we on  live .  The crowd cheered us on it burl then it was over we wait for the list to go up with band for tomorrow zane was closer   but I got a chance  see  jumping up  down    we wait to read out line  up for tomorrow   we jump up they  ready our name   then  back to crash the hardest  thing    but  managed  it  tired as we  were   three  bands  to  perform  we the second   only  one  we perform the  set  again   it went well  as we waited   for resolute  we   sat chilled    with few  drinks  as we relaxed    the panel  counted the  votes   and  made their mind  up  we  grew  nevus    Charlie twiddled her drum stick    she had  on her spare  just case they  broke  ,  and rest fidgeted   feet  finger    zane twisting in hid  crosses  chain   Jan  tapping the  cored  to some song  or the  other   stopping to  drink  then  there  was quitter  then they  called the band  name   and lastly  ours   we won  by  quite  margin  the  new  stuff   after all the time  we tried  nothing  else  to live for we won  record  deal for six album   giving us only two left .
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Untamed element
I am   Kass please heed my warning. You can prevent the future that is all too familiar to me .The government has disbanded and the world has fallen. Famine and droughts have become normal. Only you can save mankind. Don't let your government start the war. The war that caused so much suffering in my time, your future. Do heed my warning!
I'm part of the resistance it's years in the future I lost so many friends and family. I survived due to a cures but even with that I've been left scarred which I hide  with a scarf often worn over my  lower half of my   face but only covers half of the burns  as my left side is completely scarred the world as you know it has change  for the worst  government are no longer and all country  are at war  we the resistance are out to save mankind even though we can join them for I'm a vampire by their words but please don't fear me for you will  if you see me or know the true story  but I'm experiment gone wrong , well  it works but we have  flaws which our natural cousin share , we were meant for a better future they were wrong now we're forced to save  our prey  but that something  that's not necessary  with are feed  a  substitute blood called Netri-gore that stop hunger and keeps us strong  but it doesn't tasted nice some like I don't  but under press as I am now it's my only chose or reveal my  true self  which if I do I'll be imprison till my mission   is over then my death will be forced or as hoped cause and effect. I've been forced to help my kind   but I'll explain that later. I wish I could say my really name but I can't remember  or my natural hair colour  which has been altered  by drugs and dyes  so many time I've lost count my hair now a bright red  and cut to a very short  bob I have thought  very identifiable of my  kind but my eyes are  a dead giveaway  purple  eyes which I must hide expect in the past  where none  of my kind were never really know  my name I can never know I lost my identity when I enter  the program  a care child  I got  lead in the wrong  way  I got into drugs  anything to keep warm in  in the rubble of the  Armageddon world   destruction I found family of sort  as my disguise I'm there ward Kassandra  Adams    there my uncle  and aunty by marriage.
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seagulls rule

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seagulls rule and I'm stick to it
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stuck

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I've come to end of my bok plot and now i'm stuck on what happen next as book hasn't finshed now stuck what do arh
Kass
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